I can't think why I didn't leave a comment on this when I read it before, because reading it again now, I realised that I have read it before. Must have been when it was posted. But I did thoroughly enjoy reading that, it had echoes of what I wished would happen in PDAM, (except with Ginny leaving Harry).

You've done a wonderful job in fleshing out the characters with so few words, here. I felt that I really understood Ilona. And good for her, leaving him. Everybody deserves to be loved. I really loved reading how she had slowly fallen in love with Draco, too, it sounded heartbreaking actually.

Well done!